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OPEN-ENDINGCOMPOSITION开放性写作出题方式:1根据结果,解释原因Whathappened?2根据事件,接续故事Whathappenednext?Whatdidyoudowith...?Whatshouldyoudo...?Howwillyouintroduceyourschooltothem?3提出问题,给出建议写作注意原则:1、认真审题,即:审语境、审人称、审时态2、要紧扣主题,符合要求,首尾呼应3、注意写作对象和语言风格,要有读者的意识4、要进行细致描写,有细节的支撑5、要有主次之分,详略得当6、要力求内容新颖,必须符合逻辑7、要做到思想健康,积极向上海淀二模:Whenyourmothercomeshomefromwork.,shefindsthelivingroominaterriblemess.Sheasksyouthereasons.Youtellherwhathappened.审题:人称--I,时态--过去时叙事---根据结果,解释原因。切记:1审题要准;定位要清。2紧扣主题;首位呼应。3内容充实;详略得当。4合情合理;逻辑清晰。5语言简洁;交际得体。说明文说明文出题形式:1。文字+表格2。图表3。图画说明文的篇章结构主题句——引出全文的话题支持句——围绕话题展开讨论,用事实,理由,观点等来进行解释,说明或论证。结束句——对话题进行概括,总结归纳。说明文的写作方法:列举法----用事例说明主题可用表示顺序的示意词来突出每个实例。如:first,second,third,first,secondly,finally,thefirstthing(point)is…,thesecondthing(point)is…,thethirdthing(point)is…,firstofall,also,finally,one,another,thelast…以事物的重要性来排列顺序,可使文章层次清楚,重点突出。如:foronething,also,theworstthingis…,firstofall,apartfromthat,themostimportantis…,foronething,whatismore,themost…,oneimportant,moreimportantly,themostimportant…,oneproblem..,anotherproblem…,themostseriousproblem…,比较对比法:比较通常是指对人或事物之间的相同点进行分析。对比通常是侧重分析两者之间的不同点,利与弊。写作方法通常有:1)相同点---不同点分析A,A,A,B,B,B,结构2)A,B,A,B,A,B,结构(如内容较多,可逐点分析。)TopicsentencewhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparksSupportingsentence160%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaoftheentrancefees.(A)tohavearestandenjoythemselvesinthepark(A)tobecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,(A)todoharmtotheappearanceofthecity.Supportingsentence240%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged(B)needmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers(B)tobuyplantsandyoungtrees.(B)feesshouldbechargedlow.请根据以下图表和提示写一篇关于我国手机拥有量变化的报导。并阐述手机给人们生活所带来的利与弊。1.方便2.随时,随地联系3.许多设置满足不同要求4.发短信,电话记录5.接到打错的电话为之付费6.电磁污染宣武一模:请你根据下面图表用英语写一篇短文,内容要包括以下两方面:1。概括说明中美大学生的主要收入来源。2。分析产生这种不同现象的可能原因。Income*American*Chinesesources*students*students----------------------------------------------Parents*50%*90%-----------------------------------------------Part-timejobs*35%*5%-------------------------------------------------scholarships*15%*5%TheincomeoftheAmericanandtheChinesestudentscomesthroughalmostthesamechannels:parents,part-timejobsandscholarships,butthepercentageofeachisquitedifferent.HalftheAmericanstudents’incomeisfromtheirparents,thirty-fivepercentfromfrompart-timejobs,andfifteenfromscholarships.Chinesestudents,ontheotherhand,getninetypercentoftheirincomefromtheirparents.Inmyopinion,therearetwomainreasonsforthis.OneisthatChineseparentscaresomuchfortheirchildrenthatitisalmostunthinkableforstudentstoliveontheirown.TheotheristhatChinesestudentshavefewerchancestofindpart-timejobs.小结:1。确定主题;理清结构。2。信息归类;支撑论点。(相同;不同)3。上下连贯;逻辑清晰。(正确使用连接词)4。首位呼应;紧扣扣题。Wishyousuccess写作常见错误:1动词与主语关系不清误:IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandwasabouttocrossParkRoad.正:IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandhewasabouttocrossParkRoad.误:Butthecarranoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.正:Butthedriverdroveoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.误:Theparkshouldchargetheentrancefee.正:Theentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.正:Peopleshouldpayfortheentrancefeeiftheygototheparks.2句子之间的逻辑关系不清误:Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,awoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.TheoldmanandIsawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Theoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.正:Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,whowasawoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.Fortunately,Isawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Noticingtheoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.3画蛇添足、过多的长句使句子复杂化(语言不简洁)修改前:Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaspeechwhichwasratherinteresting.修改后:Afamoussportsmanwasgivinganinterestingspeech.修改前Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Theairpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriouswhichiscausedbybusesandcars.What’smore,somanyriversarepollutedbydirtywaterwhichisfromfactory.Inaddition,sandstormstruckusnowandthen,fromwhichwesufferedalot.修改后Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Asaresult,peoplehavetosuffersandstormsnowandthen.What’smore,asbusesandcarsgiveoffalotofpoisonousgases,theairisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Moreover,therearemanyriverspollutedbydirtywaterfromfactories.Thesituationisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.修改前:Assoonascamein,weheardsomevoicemadebyinstruments.Thereweresomestudentsplayingpianoviolinandsoon.修改后:Assoonaswecamein,weheardapieceofbeautifulmusicplayedbythestudentsbydifferentinstruments,suchas,piano,violinandsoon.4过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性,可读性。修改前Yesterday,therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.修改后Yesterday,apolicemanstoppedacar—Hondaatthecornerofthestreet,becauseitnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.修改前Suddenly,acarrunquicklyfromthethirdstreetandturnedtothewest.Thecardidn’tstopandhittheoldman.Thedriverdidn’tstopandhavealook.Thecarranawayquickly.Thecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.修改后Suddenly,acarturnedwestfromthe3rdStreettotheParkRoad.Ithittheoldman,butitdidn’tstopandranawayquickly.Inoticed
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