2020版高中英语 Module 6 Old and New Section Ⅳ Writing课件

[写作任务]假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Rose十年前曾随父母在你的家乡就读，最近她发来邮件想了解一下你家乡的变化，并请你给她回一封电子邮件。要点包括：1．交通状况；2．居住条件；3．生活环境。注意：1．词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearRose，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua[写作指导]一、审题定调本写作任务要求给朋友回复一封电子邮件，说明家乡的变化，属于应用文。因该邮件为朋友间的私人信件，故语言应遵循礼貌原则，但又需避免过于正式。同时，因本邮件是说明家乡的变化，故描述过去的情况时以过去时为主，说明现在的情况时以现在时为主。二、谋篇布局该邮件的正文可分为以下三部分：第一部分：表明高兴收到对方的邮件，并乐意回答对方的问题；第二部分：根据所给提示回答对方邮件中提到的问题；第三部分：期待对方来访。三、组织语言第一部分：表明高兴收到对方的邮件，并乐意回答对方的问题。普通表达高级表达★IwasveryexcitedwhenIreceivedthee­mailfromyou.★I'mwritingtotellyoumoreabout...★Nowallowmetotellyou...★Iwasextremelythrilled(激动的)whenIreceivedyoure­mail.★I'dliketoofferyousomeinformationabout...★Pleaseallowmetogiveyouabriefintroductionto...第二部分：根据所给提示回答对方邮件中提到的问题。普通表达高级表达★Inthepast,therewasonlya(n)．..roadtomyvillage.Now,a(n)．..roadhasbeenbuilt.★Tenyearsago,mosthouseswereoldwithlittlefurniture.Nowlotsofnicebuildingshavebeenbuilt.★Thereusedtobeasmallriver...,whichwasbadlypolluted.Atpresentthepollutionisundercontrolandithasbecomea(n)．..★Inthepast,theonlyapproachtomyvillagewasa(n)．..roadwhilea(n)．..roadhasbeenbuiltnow.★Tenyearsago,mostofthehouseswereoldandpoorly­furnished.Nowadays,linesofnicebuildingshavebeenbuilt.★Thebadlypollutedsmallriver...hasbeentransformed(彻底改观)andisnowa(n)．..第三部分：期待对方来访。普通表达高级表达I'mlookingforwardtoyourvisittomyhometown.Iameagerlylookingforwardtoyourcoming.常用表达1．段首常用语：(1)ThankyouforyourletterofDec.15th...(2)I'mglad/pleasedtotellyouthat...(3)Iamverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.(4)ThanksforyourinvitationtotheChristmasparty.(5)Howareyougettingalongwithyourstudy？2.话题引入常用语：(1)I'mgladtotellyousomethingabout...(2)AsfarasIknow/amconcerned/see...3．段尾常用语：(1)Pleasewritetomesoonandtellmeaboutyour...(2)I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply...(3)Withkind/bestregards/wishes.(4)Ifso,pleasee­mailmeinresponseto...【范文展示】普通范文DearRose，IwasveryexcitedwhenIreceivedthee­mailfromyou.Nowallowmetotellyouthechangestomyhometowninthepasttenyears.Inthepast,therewasonlyanarrowmountainroadtomyvillage.Now,anewwideroadhasbeenbuilt.Tenyearsago,mosthouseswereoldwithlittlefurniture.Nowlotsofnicebuildingshavebeenbuilt.Thereusedtobeasmallriverinfrontofmyvillage,whichwasbadlypolluted.Atpresentthepollutionisundercontrolandithasbecomeapopularentertainmentplaceforthevillagers.I'mlookingforwardtoyourvisittomyhometown.Yours，LiHua高级范文DearRose，IwasextremelythrilledwhenIreceivedyoure­mail.Pleaseallowmetogiveyouabriefintroductiontothechangesthathavebeenmadetomyhometownoverthepasttenyears.Inthepast,theonlyapproachtomyvillagewasanarrowmountainroadwhileanewwideroadhasbeenbuiltnow.Tenyearsago,mostofthehouseswereoldandpoorly­furnished.Nowadays,linesofnicebuildingshavebeenbuilt.Besides,thebadlypollutedsmallriverinfrontofmyvillagehasbeentransformedandisnowapopularentertainmentplaceforthevillagers.Iameagerlylookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours，LiHua实战演练假定你是李华，几年前你的家乡因地震而受到了严重的破坏。你的美国笔友Jack发来电子邮件询问你家乡的现状，请你用英语给他回一封邮件。注意：词数100左右。Onepossibleversion：DearJack，I'msogladtoreceiveyouremail.I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthechangestomyhometown.Asyouknow,theviolentearthquakethatoccurredin2014destroyedalmosteverythinginmyhometown.Treesfelldown,roadswereseriouslydestroyed,andmostbuildingswereleftinruins.However,greatchangeshavetakenplacehereinthepastfewyears.Lotsofnewbuildingsandroadshavebeenbuilt.Besides,newentertainmentcentersandparkshaveappeared,whichbringgreatpleasuretoourlife.Itisreallyamazingthattheonce­ruinedplacehasnowbeenturnedintoaparadise,fulloflife.Ihopeyoucancomeandvisitmyhometownagainsomeday.Yours，LiHua