江苏省南京市2017-2019年三年中考英语试题分类汇编--书面表达(含解析)

书面表达2019六、书面表达（满分15分）33．（15分）假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议．请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件．IDEASNEEDEDBritechisnowdesigninganappthathelpslearnerswiththeirEnglishwriting．Theappistohelplearnersexploreideas，organizethemandwritethemdown．Yourideasareneeded！Here'swhattodo：Writetoshareyourideas!Feelfreetobecreative！Pleaseletusknow：●What'sthenameoftheapp？●Whatproblemdoestheappsolve？●Whatdoestheappdo？Contactusatappdesign@Britechcom注意1．内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥．2．词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）．3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．DearSirorMadam，ThanksfordesigninganappforEnglishwriting．．YoursLiHua【分析】高分句型一：Manyofushavedifficultyinwriting．我们中的许多人写作困难．havedifficultydoing干某事有困难．高分句型二：Ihopemyadviceisworthtaking．我希望我的建议值得采纳．beworthdoing值得干某事．【解答】DearSirorMadam，ThanksfordoinganAPPforEnglishwriting．I'dliketosharemyideashere．Coulditsnameberightmadeeasy？【APP的名字】Manyofushavedifficultyinwriting．【高分句型一】Wedon'tknowhowtoorganizeideas，useproperwords，andsoon．Ihopeitcansolvetheseproblems．【APP要解决的问题】HereismyadviceonwhattheAPPdoes．First，itshouldprovidesomereadingmaterials．Themoreweread，thebetterwewrite．Second．TheAPPshouldhaveanonlinecoursesothatwecandevelopourwritingskills．Third，thereshouldbeane﹣teacherwhocancorrectmistakesandoffersuggestions．【APP能做什么】Ihopemyadviceisworthtaking．【高分句型二】【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．2018六、书面表达（满分15分）请根据你校校刊KIDSMAG中HAVEYOURSAY栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。Hi,AtKIDSMAGweliketoshareyourideasaboutourschool.Inmycolumn,HAVEYOURSAY,youcanletotherkidsknowwhatyouthink.ThismonthwewantyoutohaveyoursayaboutCultureWeekinourschool:●whattheme(主题)ofCultureWeekyoulike●whyyoulikethetheme●whatactivity/activitiesyoucanorganizeforthethemeLookingforwardtohearingfromyou.SamSouthland注意：1．对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。2．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。IamgladtosharemyideasaboutCultureWeekinourschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Onepossibleversion:IamgladtosharemyideasaboutCultureWeekinourschool.IlikethethemeaboutinternationalcookingforourCultureWeek,becausethiscanhelpusbetterunderstanddifferentcultureswhileenjoyednicefood.First,wewillinviteteachersandparentstogivetalksaboutinternationalcooking.Then,wewillholdaCookingFestival.Allthestudentscanbringtheirowndishesandsharethemwitheachother.Neartheendoftheweek,wewillhaveaDIYcompetition.Therewillbeasurpriseintheend.IhopeourCultureWeekwillbeagreatsuccess!解析：写作对文化周的主题、活动内容等进行讨论、分享。要求将自己喜欢的主题，喜欢的原因及为此安排的活动叙述清楚。考点分析：态度观点类记叙文写作2017六、书面表达(满分15分)请根据杂志KIDVOICE的内容，以“KidsandLearning”为题,用英语写一篇短文，发表你的看法。KIDSHAVEANOPINIONTOO!Hi!I’mSigmundFriend,theeditor(编辑)ofanewmagazineKIDVOICE.Welikehearingfromkids.Weknowyou’vegotthingstosay.Wewanttohearfromyou.Hereisatopicyoumighthaveanopinionabout...注意：1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。KidsandLearningAllkidswanttobegoodatlearning.▲▲▲▲▲▲▲▲【分析】这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于kidsandlearning的作文，这需要我们根据提示信息，并发挥我们的思维力和创造力，对这些内容逐一陈述．有题目可知，写这篇作文应用第三人称，时态为一般现在时．内容包括：第一部分阐述观点，孩子是否擅长学习；第二部分，孩子应如何处理好学习与玩之间的关系．重要的短语和句型：begoodat擅长justasasayinggoes正如谚语所说haveagoodknowledgeof对．有个很好的了解Allinall，onlywhenwebalancetherelationbetweenplayingandlearning，canwebegoodatlearning总之，只有处理好了学习与玩耍的关系才能学习好onlywhen…canwe…只有当…我们才会…倒装句型JustasthesayinggoesAllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy，只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻justas正如…；适当引用谚语会得高分【解答】参考答案：KidsandLearningAllkidswanttobegoodatlearning．Somechildrenaregoodatlearning，butsomechildrenaregoodatplaying，andtheyarenotgoodatlearning，why？Thisisbecausesomechildrenknowhowtobalancelearningandstudying．＜阐述观点＞First，justasthesayinggoesAllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy，＜谚语开头，易得高分＞agoodlearnershouldknowtoplayproperly，ifheorsheplayshappily，hewilltrytolearningwell．Besides，alllearningdecreasetheinterestofstudy．Second，studentsshouldmakeapropertimelist，andtrytofollowthelist．Last，parentsandteachersshouldgivetipstothestudentssothatstudentscanhaveagoodknowledgeofthestudy．＜观点层层递进＞Allinall，onlywhenwebalancetherelationbetweenplayingandlearning，canwebegoodatlearning．＜高分句型＞【点评】写图画作文时，我们最好不要遗漏图画所给的重要信息，注意不要生搬硬套，注意语句的连贯与衔接．行文要注意简化，不要抱沓冗长，最好能够写短的简单句，这样比较能够得分，同时注意写作文时使用一定的连接词，比如，what'smorelastbutnottheleast等等．写作文完成时要注意检查修改，以避免遗漏，如果有条件的话，最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，这样更容易得高分．最后，注意去使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯流畅，方能成就一篇好作文