2016专八真题写作范文

环球时代【2016英语专八】真题写作范文吴老师推荐范文PARTVWRITING[45MIN]ThefollowingtwoexcerptsareaboutIceBucketChallenge,anactivityinitiatedtoraisemoneyandawarenessforthediseaseALS(渐冻症).Fromtheexcerpts,youcanfindthattheactivityseemstohaveachievedmuchsuccess,buttherehavealsobeendoubtcancriticism.WriteanarticleofNOLESSTHAN300words,inwhichyoushould:Summarizethedevelopmentiftheicebucketchallengeactivity,andthenExpressyouropiniontowardstheactivity,especiallywhethertheproblemsfoundwiththiskindofactivitywillfinallyundermineitsoriginalpurpose.Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.WriteyourarticleonANSWERSHEETFOUR.Excerpt1ALSIceBucketChallengeTakesU.S.ByStormInthelasttwoweeks,theIceBucketChallengeTMhasquiteliterally“soaked”thenation.EveryonefromEthelKennedytoJustinTimberlakehaspouredabucketoficewateroverhisorherheadandchallengedotherstodothesameormakeadonationtofightALSwithintwenty-fourhours.BetweenJuly29andtoday,August12,theALSAssociationandits38chaptershavereceivedanastonishing$4millionindonationscomparedwith$1.12millionduringthesametimeperiodlastyear.TheALSAssociationisincrediblygratefulfortheoutpouringofsupportfromthosepeoplewhohavebeendoused,madeadonation,orboth.“Wehaveneverseenanythinglikethisinthehistoryofthedisease,”saidBarbaraNewhouse,PresidentandCEOoftheALSAssociation.Withonlyabouthalfofthegeneralpublicknowledgeableaboutamyotrophiclateralsclerosis(ALS),theIceBucketChallengeismakingaprofounddifference,sinceJuly29,theAssociationhaswelcomemorethan70,000newdonorstothecause.“Whilethemonetarydonationsareabsolutelyincredible,”saidNewhouse,“”thevisibilitythatthisdiseaseisgettingasaresultofthechallengeistrulyinvaluable.PeoplewhohaveneverbeforeheardofALSarenowengagedinthefighttofindtreatmentsandacureforALS.”Excerpt2Icebucketchallenge:who’spouringcoldwaterontheidea?Theicebucketchallengehascertainlyraisedawareness.Whetherthat’sprimarilyofthediseaseforwhichitisraisingfundsorthespeedatwhichimagesofswimsuit-cladcelebritieswillgoviralisalong-termquestion.Morepertinentrightnowiswhetherornotthecrazehasreachedatippingpoint.Asitlivedbysocialmedia,sotheicebucketchallengecoulddiebyit.ThestateofCaliforniaiscurrentlyexperiencingoneoftheworstdroughtonrecord.Sogesturessuchascompaniesdousingtheirstaffenmassinhundredsofgallonsoficewater,comeacrossmoreaswastefulPRexercisesthancharitablegestures-andarebeingcalledoutassuchonTwitter.TherehasbeenasimilarreactioninChina.Lastweek,peopleindrought-strickenHenanprovinceraisedemptyredbucketsovertheirheads,accompaniedbytheslogan“Henan,pleasesaynototheicebucketchallenge”.China’sministryforcivilaffairs,whilebroadlysupportive,haswarnedcitizensagainstthepractice’s“entertainmentandcommercialtendencies”.Buttherealdampenercouldbetheriskofbodilyharm.Doctorsaroundtheworldhavewarmedofriskstoelderlypeople,expectantmothersandpeoplewithheartconditions.2016专八真题写作范文（吴老师推荐）Soaking”theWorldMeanssometimesdeterminesthedestinyofends.IceBucketChallengeisthelatestbestexampleofthis.Inordertodirecttheworld'sattentiontoandraisefundstocureanextremelyrare,lethaldisease,amyotrophiclateralsclerosis(ALS),somequirkscameupwithaunique,dramaticandself-abusivemethodofpouringoneselffromabuckoficewater.Theresultisunprecedentedandunexpected.Lastyear,withthehelpoftheeminentvictimslikeHawkins,theALSAssociationadvancedanavenueofonly$1.12million,butthisyear’sbucketgains$4million!Soundandfurryalwayscomealongwithgoodthings.Mostopponentstotheideaarefromdrought-strickenregionslikeCaliforniaofUnitedStatesandHenanofChina.Mostunderstandably,CaliforniaiscurrentlyexperiencingoneoftheworstdroughtsonrecordandpeopleinHenanhavebeensufferingfromseverelackofwaterforperhapsoverthousandsofyears.Insomeinnermostareasoftheprovincewateriseventreasuredoveroil.Anothersourceoffurryismedicalpersonnelswhohavemadeabulkoffuss.Forthemamerebucketofwatermightkillelderlypeople,causemiscarriageforwould-bemothersandbringaboutheartattacks.Inallthesebuzzes,thiscampaignhasachievedamiracleoftheresult.JustineTimberlake`soaked'himself,TaylorSwiftpouredherselfandBrunoMarsicedhimself.WorldleaderslikeGeorgeW.Bush,RussianpresidentPutinandvicepresidentofGermanyGabrielarenotidle.Theywaitednominutetocatchtheeyesoftheworldandposedbeforecamerastoshowtheirlove.Accordingly,theyattractedthegreatestnumberofdonors.Businesscelebritiesaredoingevenmore.Apartfromwettingthemselvestothebone,theygavemoney.Theircontributionsareremarkablemakinguptwothirdsoftotal$4million.Forhundredsofyears,“EndsJustifyMeans”hasbeenheldasacreedbywhichpeoplebehavethemselves.ButtodaythiscredocanhardlyapplytotheIceBucketChallenge.JustImagine.Ifwehadinsistedoncontinuingusingcelebritieswhosufferfromthediseaseasatokenforpublicity,howevermucheffortshadbeenputtopublicity,suchafour-out-of-ahundred-thousand-probabilitydiseasecanneverbecomeknownthroughouttheworldovernight.Somyconclusion:endsdohanguponmeans.《和吴中东教授学英文写作》预约热线010-68403281