高考英语读后续写之一-——动作描写-调研课(共29张PPT)

ActionsinContinuationWriting1.学习高考读后续写中动作描写的方法；2.积累动作描写的语言表达，建立自己的语料库；3.运用所学的方法和语言知识，回归高考读后续写。Learningaims：Task1Appreciatethedescriptionsofactions2016年10月2017年6月2017年11月2018年6月高考读后续写中的动作描写…Janewalkedaway…Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.2016年10月高考读后续写Tip1Describetheprocessanddetails....Janejustwalkedonforalongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace...Sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Shesawnothingbutforest...Sheherwaycarefullyalongthestream,......Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandthemiftheycamebackagain.Tip2Selectspecificverbstomakeacionsvivid.saughtpickedinchedfeltsignalwaveflagMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside.Hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Tip3Writetheactionsofbodyparts.2017年6月高考读后续写Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,mybrotherandIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Tip4Addadv.tomaketheactionimpressive.casuallyunwillingly2017年11月高考读后续写aimlesslybravelyMydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby...Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorse.Theylookedreallycool.Tip5Choosewordsfocusingonthetheme.2018年6月高考读后续写farmhousefeedthechickenstakethesheepouttograzeridehorseSummary:skillstodescribeactions1.Focusonthetheme2.Describetheprocessanddetails3.Writebodyparts4.Selectspecificverbs5.Addadj./adv./介词短语/非谓语…Task2BuildupyourvocabularyDiscusswithyourpartners,trytofindoutthewordsorsentencestodescribeactions.Group1Group2Group3Group4actionswith“hands”walkrunactionswith“eyes”Groupwork摸/拍：fishfingerpetpat抓:snatchgrabseizegrasp拖:draghaulmopflingHisfingersstabbedatthebuttonontheflashlight.rolldownthewindowmopthefloorhaultheboxoutoftheroomtearthesealofanenvelopegivemeanaffectionatepatontheshoulderTheytookholdofmeandliftedmeintheirstrongarms.Actionswith“hands”摸/拍：fishfingerpetpat抓:snatchgrabseizegrasp拖:dragflingseizehishandandpumpeditupanddownwithterrificforceHisfingersstabbedatthebuttonontheflashlight.rolldownthewindowgivemeanaffectionatepatontheshoulderTheytookholdofmeandliftedmeintheirstrongarms.Actionswith“hands”ramblestaggerstrollslipwandertiptoecrawlstormwanderoverthecounrtysideHerfeetmadenosoundonthegrasspacebackandforth,likeanantonahotpanHebouncedintotheoffice,fullofthejoysofspring.Idraggedmyselfoutofbedandlumberedtothebathroom.walk:dartrushsprintracesprinttrotdashchargetear(tore-torn)runlikethewindpumpfuriouslyrunaroundlikeachickenwithitsheadcutoffHerushedin,hisfaceflamedwithexcitement.runoutoftheroominaburstofangerExcitedpeopletoredownthestreetlikecrazy.run:gazestareglancepeepglarespyglimpsepeercastsheep'seyesatkeepeyesfixedonthrowahatefullookatpeelmygazeawaycastanadmiringglanceatlookatsbwithafixedgazegivemeawinklifthiseyesActionswith“eyes”动作描写加修辞Ihadtomove.Imadeittothemiddleoftheboat,totheedgeofthetarpaulin(柏油帆布).Itwasahardcrawl.IfeltIwasclimbingthesideofavocalnoandIwasabouttolookovertherimintoaboilingcauldronoforangelava.fromLifeofPifromCharlieandtheChocolateFactoryEachtimehecameneartothechocolatefactory,hewouldlifthissmallpointednosehighintheairandsniffthewonderfulsweetsmellofmeltingchocolate.Sometimes,hewouldstandmotionlessoutsidethegatesforseveralminutesonend,takingdeepswallowingbreathsasthoughheweretryingtoeatthesmellitself.Task3Applythelanguageandwritingskillsintopractice情节动作描写例句被狼追赶Macheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall..与狼相击Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf...奋力逃生Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcars.写身体部位(耳、眼)加修饰语(adv)写动作过程写身体部位(手、脚、腿)2017年6月高考读后续写主题：骑行遇狼，奋力逃生？？？？？？续写：路人相助，化险为夷Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.gotintothecarMacwolfPaulhelpedrangetoffthebicycle→runtowardsthecar→getonthecar→closethedoor→sit→→see..openthedoor→startthecar...catch→shout→runaway...DescribetheprocessanddetailsUsebodyparts写身体部位手脚腿的动作：1.Hejumpedoffthebicycle.2.Hedashedtowardsthecarwithfullspeed.3.Withhisheartbeatingrapidlyandlegspumpingfuriously,heracedtowardsthecar.4.Paulopenedthedoorandstretchedouthishand.5.Macgrabbedhishandwithouthesitation,leavinghisbicyclelyingontheroad.Selectspecificverbs精选动词加修饰语(adv/介词短语/非谓语)getoffthebicycle→runtowardsthecar加修饰语加非谓语加修饰语加修饰语加修饰语腰身的动作：1.TheinstantMacsankintothebackseatandshutthedoor,Paulstartedthecarinaflash.2.Watchingthewolfwasswallowedbytheroad,Maccollapsedintothebackseat,stumpedforwords(张口结舌)andparalysedwithfear(浑身瘫软).Selectspecificverbs精选动词getonthecar→closethedoor→sit加修饰语(adj/介词短语/非谓语)adj加修饰语adj非谓语耳(听)狼叫Thewolfwalkedaroundthecarandfuriouslyhowling(咆哮)atthem,butinvain.眼(看)狼追到车门Hecaughtaglance/glimpseof(瞥见)thefierceeyesandhungrylookofthewolfbythedoor.hear→see..加介词短语/非谓语介词短语adv介词短语shout→runawa