中学生高考英语必备材料3 读写任务 概括大意 summary

•读写任务第一段概括存在问题：•1.卷面不美•2.语法错误多•3.字数过多或过少•4.抄原文•5.把例子和细节写进去•6.要点不全读写任务---如何概括原材料内容（5分）分值评分标准5按照要求概括了全部主要信息,没有增加与原文无关的信息,没有照抄原文的句子．语言结构正确，行文规范．4基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子．语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范．3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文．语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范．2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭．语言结构不够准确，行文不规范．0-1没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文．语言结构不准确，行文不规范．1.Identifythestyle（确定文体）:narration/argumentation/exposition记叙文议论文说明文2.Underlinethekeywords,phrases,andsentences.（划出关键句，找出要点）3.Inserttransitionalwordsandphraseswherenecessary.Combinesentencesforasmooth,logicalflowofideas.（插入适当的连接词，让文章流畅）注意：1）25-40个字之内不会造成扣分2）一般情况下用第三人称如何概括原材料？•1.Everyonehasanexperiencetheywouldrathernotforget.Someareembarrassing,somearemoving,andsometeachusalesson.Hereisastoryofmine.•LastSundayIwentfishing.Aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait,Isatdownonthebankofthelake.Buttwohourslater,Ididn’tcatchanyfish.Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff,preparingtogobackhome.•Justthen,Isawanoldmansittingnearme.Tomysurprise,hisbasketwasfulloffish,soIwentovertohim,wantingtoknowwhy.“Excuseme,buthowlonghaveyousathere?”Iasked.“Aboutfourhours,”heanswered.“Fourhours?”Icouldn’tbelievemyears.“Yes.It’sveryimportanttobepatient,”theoldmansaid.“Don’tconsiderfishingatiringsport.Justenjoyit.”Suddenly,Iunderstoodwhathesaid.Imustlearntobepatient.ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently.Ifeltafishtouchthebait,butIdidn’tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin.Atlast,Icaughtit.Thismademeveryhappy.Inthefollowingsixhours,Icaughtover10fish.•Onmywayhome,Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank.Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.(夹叙夹议)Thesummaryofanarrativearticleincludes:(记叙文概括要点包括)1.Who?2.Whathappened?3.TheOutcome(结果)4.Thelesson(教训;教益)（夹叙夹议的文章需要加入教益或教训）•Who?•Theauthor\writer•Whathappened?•Theauthorwentfishingbutcaughtnothingatfirst,laterhemetanoldmanwhotoldhim….•TheOutcome•Hecaughtsomefishandrealizedthat…•Thelesson•Thesecretofsuccesswaspatience.参考范文1：Theauthorwentfishingbutcaughtnothingatfirst,laterhemetanoldmanwhomadehimrealizethatthekeytosuccesswaspatience.(27words)参考范文2：Thestoryisaboutanunforgettablelessonofthewriterfromanoldmanwhilefishing,throughwhichthewriterrealizedpatiencewasveryimportantandthatitwasthesecretofsuccess.(33words)•2.Scientistsfindthathard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Careerwomenarehealthierthanhousewives.Evidenceshowsthatthejoblessareinpoorerhealththanthejob-holders.Astudyshowsthatwhenevertheemploymentrateincreasesby1%,thedeathrateincreasecorrespondingly(相应地)by2%.Allthiscomesdowntoonepoint:workishelpfultohealth.•Whyisworkgoodforhealth?Itisbecauseworkkeepspeoplebusy,awayfromloneliness.Researchesshowthatpeoplefeelunhappy,worriedandlonelywhentheyhavenothingtodo.Instead,thehappiestarethosewhoarebusy.Workservesasabridgebetweenmanandreality.Bywork,peoplecomeintocontactwitheachother.Bycollectiveactivities,theyfindfriendshipandwarmth.Thisishelpfultohealth.Thelossofworkmeansthelossofeverything.Itaffectsmanspirituallyandmakeshimlikelytodisease.•Besides,workgivesoneasenseoffulfillmentandasenseofachievement.Workmakesonefeelhisvalueandstatusinsociety.Whenawriterfinisheshiswritingorteacherseeshisstudentsgrow,theyarehappybeyondwords.议论文Theframeworkofanargumentativearticle议论文概括框架Mainidea(Topicsentence):Supportingreasons(Supportingsentences):1.2.3.…Conclusion:结论论据论点参考范文：Thewriterpointsoutthatworkisbeneficialtoourhealthbecauseworkmakespeoplegetridofloneliness,connectwitheachotherandfeelfruitful.(27words)•3.Eyecareisanimportantfactorinallofourlives.Withouteyes,weseemtobeabletodonothing.But,whatcanwedototakecareofeyes?Firstly,weshouldeathealthyfoods.Secondly,don’tsitbeforeacomputerscreenorTVfortoolongtimeandtakeregularrestatintervalssoastorelaxtheeyemuscles.Thirdly,havingenoughsleepisthebestrestforeyes.•Besidesthosenotices,youshouldbeawareofsomethreatstoeyesindailylives.Excessiveexposuretobrightsunlightisharmfultoeyes,therefore,whengoingout,especiallyinsummertime,putonapairofqualifiedsunglasses.Stayawayfromsmoking.Someingredientsincigarettesarecarcinogenesis(致癌的).•Lastbutnotleast,takeregularmedicalexaminestocheckoutthepotentialeyediseaseandpreventitsdeterioration(退化).Eyesarethemostimportantsenseorgansandoneshouldusepropereyecareproductstoavoidfurtherirritations(刺激)andensurelongevityatease.说明文Theframeworkofanexpositoryarticle:说明文概括框架problem(问题或现象)+solution(解决方法)参考范文：Theauthortellsushowtotakecareofoureyes,includingeatinghealthyfood,givingthemenoughtimetorest,knowingsomethreats,andtakingfrequenteyeexaminations.4.新闻类文章(newsreport)的概括技巧:中心大意落在第一段•BEIJING-ChinaonFridayurgedJapantotakepracticalactiontoimprovebilateralrelationsamidaterritorialdisputeregardingnearbyislands.•AresolutionadoptedbytheJapaneseHouseofRepresentativessaidthatasimportantpartnerswithsharedinterests,relationsbetweenJapanandChinashouldbedeepenedsoastopromoteregionalandinternationalpeace,stabilityandprosperity.•SincetheJapanesesideiswillingtodeepenbilateralrelations,thenitshouldtakepracticalactiontothatend,ForeignMinistryspokesmanHongLeisaid.•However,theJapaneseresolutionreiteratedthattheDiaoyuIsland