初三英语写作训练

初三英语写作训练什么是好篇章结构？三段式作文Middle正文Ending结尾concludingsentence结论句----对全文的总结和概括。【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】supportingsentences支持句----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用连接词】topicsentence主题句----说出文中的要点、核心问题【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】Beginning开头•开头万能句型：•1)....playsanimportantpartinthe...•2)Asweallknow,...becomesmoreandmore....•3)Aseverybodyknows,...isoneofthemost...in....•4)Manypeoplesaythat....ButIdon’tthinkso.•5)Iwillneverforgetthe....•造主题句训练Makeatopicsentence.•1）Smoking•Asweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.•Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdon’tthinkso.•Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.•TheSpringFestival•IwillneverforgettheSpringFestival.•TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife.•ManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival.ButIdon’tthinkso.•LearningEnglish•Asweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.•Manypeoplesayit’sdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdon’tthinkso.•Tobeavolunteer•Asweallknow,the16thAsianGamesiscomingsoon.Iwanttobeavolunteerforit.•Avolunteerplaysanimportantpartinourlife.•ASchoolTrip•Iwillneverforgettheschooltriplastweek.•【写好结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】•1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点,注意避免重复句式。•2.结尾经典词组、句型：•Atlast/Finally...最后Inaword,...总而言之Inshort,...简言之Wehopethat···我们希望•Let’stryourbestto....•Ibelieveifwecan...,...willbe....•Whata...!/How...!•.根据主题概括训练Makeaconcludingsentence•1）Keepinghealthy•Let’stryourbesttokeephealthy.•Inshort,it’simportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.•）Helpingothers•Ibelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.•Protecttheenvironment•Let’stryourbesttobeagreenconsumer.•Inoneword,it’snecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.•Trips/Xiamen•HowbeautifulXiamenis!WhynotconsidercomingtoBeijingandenjoyingyourself?开头、结尾的实战训练•书面表达•在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。•提示：1.扔垃圾2.扫地3.帮助妈妈做饭•4.洗衣服5.为花浇水6.饭后洗碗•要求：语句通畅，语法正确。不得逐句翻译。•满分作文（25分）•Asweallknow,it’simportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife.Ioftenhelpthemdohousework.Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning.Ihelpmymothercooklunch.Aftersupper,Ialwayswashdishes.Ithinkitcanmakemyparentsfeelmoreenjoyableafterwork.Ialwayswashclothesformyfamily.Besides,wateringtheflowersisalsomyduty.Ilikethemverymuchandtakegoodcareofthem.Inaword,themorehouseworkIdo,thehappiermyparentswillbe.（即总括又阐明看法）常用于第一个推展段落开头的字词：•Everybodyknowsthat…•Itistruethat…•Thereasonwhy…isthat…•Whatismoreseriousisthat…•Wehavereasontobelievethat…•Itcanbeeasilyseenthat…常用于第二个推展段落开头的字词（语气与第一个推展段不同或相反）：•Butitisapitythat…•However,…•Ontheotherhand,…•▲【正文：语言简洁，层次分明】•1.长句短句交叉使用最好。•2.基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用，基础好的同学要恰当写些从句•提高档次。•3.把握要点，层次清晰。•4.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，例如：and,so,or,but,become•正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气•☆需要熟记的连接词有：•1、按事情发展的先后或时间顺序•1）Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,•2）first,then/next,afterthat/next,finally•3)soon,suddenly,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,atthesametime,not...until,before,after,when,while,during•2、表示并列•notonly...butalso,both...and,either...or,•neither...nor，on(the)onehand…ontheotherhand•3、表示举例或补充•1）forexample•2）besides/what’smore/what’sworse•4、表示转折however,but，although,insteadof•5、表示原因thanksto,becauseof，because•6、表示结果asresult(of),so，so...that,such...that,•7、表目的inorderto,sothat•8、表比较thesameas,than,ofall.