2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 5 First aid Section Ⅴ Writing

急救[技法指导]本单元的写作任务为介绍急救措施，为指导性说明文，该类说明文旨在为读者提供解决问题的方法及具体步骤。这类写作的特点是：目的明确、简洁明了、步骤清晰、操作性强。基本结构是：第一部分：对要说明的现象或事物作简单介绍，引出主题。第二部分：按照一定的顺序对要说明的现象或事物进行客观描述。第三部分：简要总结全文。要写好这一类文章，应注意以下几点：1．按照时间顺序或空间顺序描述，要条理清楚、详略得当。2．注意句式的灵活使用，避免句式单一。3．时态多选用一般现在时，人称宜用第一人称复数或第二人称。[黄金表达]1．过程说明常用表达①Whenyoufind/see...,whatshouldyoudo?②Becareful(not)to...③Iftheinjuriesare...,itisvitalto...④Inaddition/Then/Next/Also/Atthesametime,youmust/should...⑤Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,...Secondly,...Besides/Inaddition/What'smore,...Atlast/Finally,...2．结尾常用表达①Lastbutnotleast,you'dbetter...②Moreimportantly,youshould...③Thelastbutmostimportantstepis...④Inaword,aslongasyou...youcan...[典题演练]流鼻血是人们在日常生活中经常遇到的小问题。请结合下面的要点，写一篇短文，介绍针对流鼻血应该采取的一些措施。1．流鼻血时，应坐着或者站着，勿平躺，因为平躺会使头部血压升高，更易出血。2．可用拇指和食指捏住鼻翼两侧，暂时用嘴呼吸；同时，在前额敷上一块凉毛巾，一般冷敷10～30分钟。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出(不计入总词数)。Anosebleedisacommonaccident谋篇布局1．体裁：说明文2．话题：急救知识3．时态：一般现在时4．人称：第二人称5．结构第一段：总的概括介绍第二段：具体介绍步骤第三段：总结联想词汇1．采取措施答案：takemeasures答案2．平躺答案：liedown答案3．如果必要的话答案：ifnecessary答案4．同时答案：meanwhile答案5．牢记答案：keepsth.inmind答案连词成句1．流鼻血时，应坐着或者站着，勿平躺。Whenyouarebleeding,neverliedown,you'dbettersituporstand.→Whilebleeding,neverliedown,you'resupposedtosituporstandstraight.(升级句)2．同时，在前额敷上一块凉毛巾，一般冷敷10～30分钟。Atthesametime,putacoldtowelonyourforehead,anddothisfor10～30minutes.→Meanwhile,putacoldtowelonyourforehead,whichlastsforabouttentothirtyminutes.(升级句)3．牢记这些建议，会大有益处。Rememberthesesuggestions,andtheywilldoyougood.→Keepthesesuggestionsinmindandtheyareofgreatvalue.(升级句)连句成篇Anosebleedisacommonaccidentthatoftenhappensinourdailylife,soknowinghowtostopitisnecessary.Nowwearegoingtolearnsomethingaboutwhatwecandotostopit.Firstofall,whilebleeding,neverliedown,you'resupposedtosituporstandstraight,oryournosewillbleedworsebecauseoftheincreasedbloodpressureinyourhead.Then,pinchbothsidesofyournosetogetherwithyourthumbandforefingerandbreathethroughyourmouth.Meanwhile,putacoldtowelonyourforehead,whichlastsforabouttentothirtyminutes.Alltheabovearemysuggestions.Keepthesesuggestionsinmindandtheyareofgreatvalue.[跟踪训练]请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文，简要介绍一下对遇到心脏病等疾病突发(seizure)病人应该采取什么样的措施。题目：FirstAidforSeizures急救过程中的注意事项：1．把附近的危险物体移开以免病人受到伤害；不要移动病人，除非他们处于危险中。2．把病人的头部用垫子垫起来，等病发结束后帮助病人呼吸。3．在病人没有完全恢复之前不要给他任何吃的或喝的东西；等病人完全恢复以后再离开。4．如果病情发作持续5分钟以上，打电话叫救护车。FirstAidforSeizures[精彩范文][名师点评]①Thereisnodoubtthat...固定句式，意为“毫无疑问……”。②unless引导条件状语从句，描述一个相反的情况。③once引导时间状语从句。④until引导时间状语从句。⑤ifnecessary条件状语从句的省略，相当于ifitisnecessary。[总评]文章开头结尾相互呼应，中间有关急救过程的注意事项用Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,Then表示时间顺序，结构合理，行文流畅。课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。IfyouspeaktoalocalaboutyourstayinChengdu,they'llprobablyaskifyou'vetriedhotpot.Everyone1(live)hereseemstoloveit,andtryingitshouldbea2(fix)partofeveryone'sculinarytourofSichuan.Hotpotrestaurantscan3(find)onprettymucheverystreetinChengdu,butthequalityandtastecanvaryhugely.Whenyoudogoforhotpot,youwilloftenbeaskedtomakea4(choose)ofbrothinwhichyoucookyourrawingredients(食材).Ifyou're5(adventure)andupforachallenge,thetraditionaloilyspicybrothmightbejustthethingyou'reafter.But6youhaven'tyetfullyadaptedtothelocaltaste,you'dbetterchooseanon­spicybroth,or7(go)foralessspicyoption.Bear8mindthatsomebrothslikethetomato,mushroomornorthernstylewillnotbeonofferateveryrestaurant.Halfspicyandhalfclearbrothis9(ready)availableatmostrestaurants;thesepotseithercomedivideddownthemiddlelikeagiantyinandyang,orwith10separatesmallerpotofclearbrothinthemiddle.Ifyoucan'tbeartoomuchchiliandoil,butwanttohaveatry,askforyuanyangguo.1．2.3.4.5．6.7.8.9．10.答案：1.living2.fixed3.befound4.choice5.adventurous6.if/when7.go8.in9.readily10.a答案